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Re: MyNovelChallenge - Chapter II
Poor Garam... I knew he was going to get into some kind of trouble. Loved the beginning with the practice spar, and then the bit about him writing a book. ...
Mar 13, 2006 -
Re: Faeid (part II; edited)
EDIT! YAY! Character note: Nyren is now Nyn. Faeid Draft III, Mon 13 Mar 2006 Part Two: The Six Spokes of the Wheel “Do my eyes deceive me, or has ...
Mar 13, 2006 -
Re: Faeid (Part I; Edited)
EDITED! Thanks to all who helped in this. Faeid Draft III, Mon 13 Mar 2006 Part One: Dawning “And what of your son, sire?” Lord Perdhel of Gongolas shifted his ...
Mar 13, 2006 -
Re: Faeid (Part I; Edited)
Hey what a coinkidink, I am editing Faeid right now... again. Ilen is an kingdom, Aea is the land/planet. I should probably make that clear, before chapter two. Kay, thank ...
Mar 13, 2006 -
Re: A Port In The Caribbean
...a pirates life for me... oh sorry wrong plot... At this time in the evening, the town was mostly empty: a few others traversed the wintered ground, and the continuous ...
Mar 13, 2006 -
Re: vocal artillery (en español)
thank you dear! I should have put this up - Cumbia, is a form of dance from Columbia. So basically 'cumbia' means 'dance'... Cumbia is originally a Colombian folk dance ...
Mar 12, 2006 -
Re: Lounge Singer
Awww thank you all... :oops: I really enjoyed writing this one. And Xan, alliteration is the word I think you are thinking of. Ciao, CL.
Mar 12, 2006 -
Re: Riddle
Oooo, just lovely. Made me laugh. :D
Mar 10, 2006 -
Re: Faeid (part III)
About the words at the end, they do get explained in speech, but much later. So I thought I'd explain them now. Thanks Adam. :D Ciao CL.
Mar 9, 2006 -
Re: Faeid (part II; edited)
Thank you both. Imp, thanks for the tip on the 'washing out'. I have to work on the flow a lot in this chapter. Brioris happens to be my favorite ...
Mar 8, 2006 -
Re: Faeid (Part I; Edited)
Thank you all. I was having some definite problems with fluidity there. And Adam, I've done a bit of research (actually a lot...) on medieval periods of history; men 'signed ...
Mar 7, 2006 -
Re: Writers Challenge: Hot Dog
Their advanced technology, like Ireland before the beer Is created over and over in the square of life (Birth, school, work, death) - That is genius right there Liz! Brava!
Mar 3, 2006 -
Re: Sans Soleil (short)
Well on first thought Abby is... vampiric, but then I thought about what you said in your disclaimer, and that spawned some interesting thoughts. or she has some real Freudian ...
Mar 1, 2006 -
Re: Flight of the Pegasus: Part 1
I'll be looking forward too it, hon. Can't resist a good historical fiction... "topgallant" is indeed a spiffy word... Her mainmast topgallant pierced the bottom of the merging rain clouds, ...
Feb 28, 2006 -
Re: Shakespeare
I have it on tape somewheres... "Adam, why do you think every women in Shakesphere wears hideously ugly wigs, and barfs everywhere?" (paraphrased from The Reduced Shakespeare Company's The Complete ...
Feb 26, 2006
